Revising the introduction

What we did in class, today – Referring to the Revision – Introductions, students revised their first rough draft.

Today’s class video – The link to today’s class video is in MyGUST.


  1. Read at least three Empower3000 articles and do the Activity for each reading before midnight tomorrow, Feb 14.
  2. Revise your introduction in the same file that you submitted your first rough draft. Submit the file – which now contains both the original rough draft and your revised draft – to Turnitin before class on Sunday, Feb. 16.

What we will do in class on Sunday, Feb. 16 – We will begin writing the first main point in our paper.

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