Revising the introduction and first body paragraph

What we did in class, today – I worked one-on-one with as many students as possible to revise their introductions and first main points. The rest of the class worked on revising and editing their final draft of the introduction and revising their first main point.

Class video – Today’s class was not taped.


  1. Edit and revise your introduction. Revise the rough draft of the first main point. Add drafts of your second and third main points. Submit the revisions in the same file I returned to you today. It should be submitted to Turnitin before class on Thursday.
  2. Read at least three Empower3000 articles and complete the accompanying Activity. If you need more articles to read, use Search in Empower3000 to locate topics that you are interested in.

What we will do in class on Thursday, Feb. 20 – We will write the conclusion rough draft in class.

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